Apple

Name: Apple
Age: 4 moons
Gender: Male
Rank: Kit
Clan: Loner (for now)

Appearance: A mixture of light brown and dark brown fur with pale blue eyes. Apple is slightly smaller than average, with short ears. His fur is matted with mud, dirt, leaves, and twigs.

Personality: Apple is very enegetic, brash, and arrogant. He is also very self reliant, introverted, and lonely. This can easily be changed however, due to his young age. With a little discipline, social interaction, and love Apple could completely change.

Skills: (out of 10) (As a Warrior)
Fighting - 8
Hunting - 6
Climbing - 7
Running - 7
Swimming - 4
Strength - 7
Memory skills - 6

Family:
Mother - Cone (Dead, loner)
Father - Rocky (Abandoned mother and kit at birth, loner)
Littermates/siblings - None.

History: Apple's parents met just outside clan territory, where his father mated with his mother. Displeased that only one kit was produced, and a small one at that, Apple's father simply left. Apple's mother, wanting a better life for her newborn kit than that of a rogue, traveled to the FrostClan camp on a warm but dark night, and left her 1/2 moon old kit by the entrance before leaving, with an apple next to him, a symbol of his name. She left, forcing herself not to look back, hoping that the Clan cats would accept him and raise him as one of their own.

When this character is accepted, I will start a thread that involves a clan cat discovering Apple, and at that time he will join the clan of the cat who found him.

This a great first audition! But, this thread you plan on making would be interfering with our current plot, so you could either change him into a Clan cat now or leave him as a loner.

Daisyleap wrote:This a great first audition! But, this thread you plan on making would be interfering with our current plot, so you could either change him into a Clan cat now or leave him as a loner.

What is the plot I would be interfering with? Because I feel that joining a clan gives flavor and lots of RP fun, while staying a loner or starting as a clan cat is a little blander.

Our plot at the moment involves rogues attacking, so it would be a little interruptive.

@Daisyleap and @Willowpoppy 


How about this? A compromise of ideas: Apple's mother, wanting a better life for her newborn kit than that of a rogue, traveled to the FrostClan camp on a warm but dark night, and left her 1/2 moon old kit by the entrance before leaving, with an apple next to him, a symbol of his name. She left, forcing herself not to look back, hoping that the Clan cats would accept him and raise him as one of their own. 

Apple (kit) would basically start as a clan cat, and my thread would simply begin with him waking next to a queen that found him and decided to adopt him (said queen can be anyone willing to adopt adopt kit). Is this ok?

Is anybody going to respond to this and help me with this character??! If not I'm going to quit this site.

@TheRogue unfortunately a lot of us are very busy at the moment with school and things, we can't reply immediately.

Her history is okay like that, but you'd probably have to make him a mother as a lot of us already have cats.
Her skills are a little low? Typically for kits we show the skills with (as a warrior) beside it.

@Willowpoppy sorry for my impatience. I fixed the skills and reworked the bio with my new idea. I would also really prefer to not make Apple's mother because then I would be RPing with just myself...

Anyways he should be all fixed now, right?

TheRogue wrote:Apple (kit) would basically start as a clan cat, and my thread would simply begin with him waking next to a queen that found him and decided to adopt him (said queen can be anyone willing to adopt adopt kit). Is this ok?

Hello, @TheRogue sorry for the late responses! What I have quoted would be great. you don't have to make a queen, you can always PM another member with a queen already, or talk about it in the chatbox. You can also post in "Character Announcements", which you can find on the homepage. I'm sure someone will respond to that.

Sorry for the double post.

Could you please fix the appearance? You said there are mud and twigs in his fur, but its not realistic for a healthy cat to always have dirty fur. Also, one more skill below 5 would be nice, it avoids having a "perfect" character.

Bump please