New and improve Badgerstripe

Name: Badgerstripe
Age: 18 moons
Gender: tom
Rank: warrior
Clan: BrightClan

Appearance: large Black and white tom. He is Blind in his left eye and has a very
short tail.

Personality: very forgetful, But loyal and truthful. He never leaves a cat
Behind. But he is very untrusting and it is hard to gain his respect.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 8
Hunting -  7
Climbing - 7
Running -  5
Swimming - 5
Strength -  9
Memory skills - 3

Family:
Mother - racoon fur (Deceased)
Father -  claw pelt (Deceased)
Littermates/siblings -  none

History: his mother and father where members of Bright clan, But he ran
off to Become a loner. He tought himself to hunt and all the other warrior stuff
but one Day while he was hunting in early new leaf, he fell in to a river and hit his
head extremly hard and he became very frogetful ever since. One day when he was a loner
He got in a fight with some rouges and they clawed his left eye severly leaveing him half Blind.At 15 moons old he came Back to bright clan to become a warrior.

RIVER NOT RIVE

I have warrior cat role played for years this is just the first time In for ever i have.

Hi Badgerstripe. Welcome to warriorclan and I am happy that you are wanting to roleplay with us.

Your audition needs more detail. The skills look good but the appearance, personality and history need more detail. Also are the family members alive or deceased?
https://warriorclan.forumotion.com/f7-accepted-auditions

Edit: I noticed that you have another topic with the same audition. Next time please remember to use the edit button in the top right hand corner of your posts. Also I noticed that on the other audition Quake mentioned for you that all of your character's names unless they are a rogue, loner, or kitty pet need to be one word.

#bump @Badgerstripe

IT HAS BEEN EDITEDDDDDDD

@Badgerstripe if it has been edited, please post, because we won't know otherwise. And please do not use caps lock like that, as we count it as spam. 

Would you like me to get rid of the "code" box for you?

Sorry, this is all new to me.

That's okay, we understand  

Do you want me to get rid of the code box for you??

@Badgerstripe, to change the text, you click the 'Insert unformatted text' button up top. Copy your text and then paste it there. Click insert when done.

#Bump, @Badgerstripe.

#Bump, @Badgerstripe. If not completed and fixed within three days this audition will be moved to the burial grounds.