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Lostblaze of WaterClan
Fri Jun 09, 2017 3:21 pm
Name: Lostblaze
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Male
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Water
Appearance: He has a bright orange coat, dark brown ears and snout as well as front paws. His chest and the upper part of his belly are white, and he has piercing ice blue eyes.
Personality: Lostblaze is thoughtful and kind, tending to the elders and queens whenever he's not out hunting or on a patrol. Being the quietest of his siblings, he never really voices his opinions so he's seen as shy. He can be incredibly distant most of the time, preferring to be by himself than on a patrol or in a hunting party. To most, he'd be seen as rude but once he lets you get to know him, he's quite nice.
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 5
Hunting - 9
Climbing - 8
Running - 9
Swimming - 10
Strength - 8
Memory skills - 10
Family:
Mother - Vinesoar (deceased)
Father - Tigereye (deceased)
Littermates/siblings - Cherryrose (she-cat, deceased), Shaderiver (tom), Darkshine (she-cat)
History: Unlike his brother and sisters, Lostblaze did not have an easy time growing up in WaterClan. He was teased relentlessly by both his littermates and an apprentice that later on became his mentor because of his unique appearance. He often hid behind his mother or father, hoping they'd stop. Throughout his training, he was forced to exhaustion constantly. When he became a warrior, he vowed to never treat any cat the way he'd been treated.
Even after his sister, Cherryrose's death, he stayed true to his morals.
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Male
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Water
Appearance: He has a bright orange coat, dark brown ears and snout as well as front paws. His chest and the upper part of his belly are white, and he has piercing ice blue eyes.
Personality: Lostblaze is thoughtful and kind, tending to the elders and queens whenever he's not out hunting or on a patrol. Being the quietest of his siblings, he never really voices his opinions so he's seen as shy. He can be incredibly distant most of the time, preferring to be by himself than on a patrol or in a hunting party. To most, he'd be seen as rude but once he lets you get to know him, he's quite nice.
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 5
Hunting - 9
Climbing - 8
Running - 9
Swimming - 10
Strength - 8
Memory skills - 10
Family:
Mother - Vinesoar (deceased)
Father - Tigereye (deceased)
Littermates/siblings - Cherryrose (she-cat, deceased), Shaderiver (tom), Darkshine (she-cat)
History: Unlike his brother and sisters, Lostblaze did not have an easy time growing up in WaterClan. He was teased relentlessly by both his littermates and an apprentice that later on became his mentor because of his unique appearance. He often hid behind his mother or father, hoping they'd stop. Throughout his training, he was forced to exhaustion constantly. When he became a warrior, he vowed to never treat any cat the way he'd been treated.
Even after his sister, Cherryrose's death, he stayed true to his morals.
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Re: Lostblaze of WaterClan
Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:11 pm
Hunting and Fighting can't both be good(like I said on your other audition)
In the history where it says he got teased, try putting a bit more into it. Why did he get teased? How did he react?
In the history where it says he got teased, try putting a bit more into it. Why did he get teased? How did he react?
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Re: Lostblaze of WaterClan
Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:35 pm
Done ^-^
DaisyleapForum Overseer
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Re: Lostblaze of WaterClan
Sun Jun 11, 2017 4:38 am
His personality needs to be elaborated more. He doesn't have any negative or neutral traits either.
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Re: Lostblaze of WaterClan
Sun Jun 11, 2017 4:50 am
Aaand done! :3
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