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Darkshine of WaterClan
Fri Jun 09, 2017 3:39 pm
Name: Darkshine
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Water
Appearance: She's a slender, smokey grey shecat with a white upper chest and muzzle. Her right hindpaw is a dark orange and her eyes are sea green.
Personality: Energetic and mischievous, Darkshine is always playing jokes on her brothers when they hunt or patrol together.Though sometimes her jokes go too far and she ends up hurting those she loves without intending to. Instead of apologizing, she'll usually just laugh it off or shrug. She is an incredibly fierce warrior, using tooth and claw to defend her beloved clan to the death.
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting- 8
Hunting - 5
Climbing - 6
Running - 8
Swimming - 10
Strength - 7
Memory skills - 7
Family:
Mother - Vinesoar(deceased)
Father - Tigereye (deceased)
Littermates/siblings - Cherryrose (shecat, deceased), Lostblaze (tom), Shaderiver (tom)
History: Darkshine was the hyper cat of her litter, always managing to find herself getting under some cat's paws, mostly her father's. When he died, she took it harder than the rest of her littermates, becoming antisocial and depressed. With the help of Cherryrose and Lostblaze, she was brought back to her normal, hyper self.
When she lost her sister, she worked herself overtime, visiting the medicine den frequently because of bleeding paws and thorns. Despite her grief, she stayed happy for her family, believing she needed to be strong for them.
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Water
Appearance: She's a slender, smokey grey shecat with a white upper chest and muzzle. Her right hindpaw is a dark orange and her eyes are sea green.
Personality: Energetic and mischievous, Darkshine is always playing jokes on her brothers when they hunt or patrol together.Though sometimes her jokes go too far and she ends up hurting those she loves without intending to. Instead of apologizing, she'll usually just laugh it off or shrug. She is an incredibly fierce warrior, using tooth and claw to defend her beloved clan to the death.
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting- 8
Hunting - 5
Climbing - 6
Running - 8
Swimming - 10
Strength - 7
Memory skills - 7
Family:
Mother - Vinesoar(deceased)
Father - Tigereye (deceased)
Littermates/siblings - Cherryrose (shecat, deceased), Lostblaze (tom), Shaderiver (tom)
History: Darkshine was the hyper cat of her litter, always managing to find herself getting under some cat's paws, mostly her father's. When he died, she took it harder than the rest of her littermates, becoming antisocial and depressed. With the help of Cherryrose and Lostblaze, she was brought back to her normal, hyper self.
When she lost her sister, she worked herself overtime, visiting the medicine den frequently because of bleeding paws and thorns. Despite her grief, she stayed happy for her family, believing she needed to be strong for them.
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Re: Darkshine of WaterClan
Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:09 pm
She needs some flaws and hunting and fighting can't both be good
Once you fix that I think you'll be okay
Once you fix that I think you'll be okay
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Re: Darkshine of WaterClan
Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:35 pm
Aaand done!
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Re: Darkshine of WaterClan
Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:39 pm
Some of the skills are still a bit high but 
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