Iceshatter of Brightclan (not done)

Tue Jun 13, 2017 5:53 pm

Name: Iceshatter
Age: 22 moons
Gender: female/tabby
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Brightclan

Appearance: Pure white, medium or normal-sized tabby, slightly slimmer than most cats but is hardly noticeable due to her fluffiness, beautiful icy blue eyes, and very exaggerated expressions.

Personality:

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 6
Hunting - 8
Climbing - 5
Running - 4
Swimming - 1
Strength - 6
Memory skills - 3

Family:
Mother - Dawnmist
Father - Silverclaw
Littermates/siblings - Skyleap (decreased)
kits/children - Not yet my dudes (I forgot this was her reincarnation)

History: Nothing spectacular. Two cats have two more cats named Skyleap and Iceshatter (later after they become warriors duh). Skyleap died in a camp flood. Iceshatter still grieves and stuff, but nothing traumatic really happened.

I didn't know what to do, she has a normal history I guess.

Tue Jun 13, 2017 6:33 pm

Can you clear up the history a little? Typically if there are dead family members we put (deceased) beside their names just to make it clearer. She wouldn't be accused of treason without valid reasoning.

Wed Jun 14, 2017 3:50 am

AHhh I didn't make it up about her being accused for treason. Again, I rp on a game and the clan leader thought that if I visited my friends clan (outside of rp) then I was ''plotting something". I didn't really know how to connect that with Ice.

Wed Jun 14, 2017 8:36 am

This isn't the same place though, she wouldn't be accused of treason here unless there was good evidence.

Wed Jun 14, 2017 8:41 am

Ahh okay. I was trying to explain how in her past she had to switch clans. Since this is a reincarnation of her, I'll just make a simpler one. I totally forgot about that lol.

Wed Jun 14, 2017 11:28 am

Is she a brown tabby? There are many types lol and i feel like her personality could be developed a little more, as well as the bit about being mother to five kits taken out?

Wed Jun 14, 2017 11:42 am

I keep forgetting to take out the kits part I hate myself.

And yes, you're right, her personality I should have added more. +++ I haTE myself so much I forgot to add the freaking fur color.

Dear lord this is taking longer than it should lol

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