Brackenflower of Fireclan

Tue Jul 04, 2017 12:59 pm

~~Brackenkit~~ - ~~Brackenpaw~~ - Brackenflower

She-cat

Warrior

Fireclan

28 moons

Appearance~ Brackenflower is a dark brown she-cat with darker tabby stripes; similar to a tiger. She has short, soft, and glossy fur. She also has long whiskers, pink paw pads and nose, and pale green eyes.

Personality~ Brackenflower is very similar in personality to her sister Ambershine; she is kind and caring and will help a clan cat in need, but she will not help any cat that is not a clan cat, such as a rogue, loner, and kittypet. Also there is a couple things that are different; her temper is a bit short and she despises being bothered constantly, or ordered to do something she does not agree with. She has a tendency to talk back to anyone who disagrees with her or even with anyone else. She has a soft spot for kits, adoring her sister's children.

Family~

mother - Pineflower (deceased)

father - Ashenfire (open)

siblings - Ambershine (Willowstorm's), Flarepaw (deceased), {2 open slots}, multiple older siblings (open)

mate - N/A (open)

kits - none

History~ Brackenflower was born as Brackenkit, for her brown tabby fur and stripes; along with her three siblings to a lovely queen named Pineflower. The queen was growing old, and though this was her last litter, she loved them just as much as she did her first litter many moons ago. The kits all loved her dearly, and their father was a little distant but obviously still loved them. The kits became apprentices without many events in their kithood, not long before Pineflower fell sick. She didn't eat for a while, though she was coaxed to, and eventually died from the strange lump in her stomach. The litter was heartbroken, but not as much as Ashenfire, who retreated within himself and didn't talk to them. They continued to train, as much as it hurt, and two sunrises before their warrior ceremony, a badger attacked a few of them as they were hunting on the FrostClan border. A strange FrostClan warrior came to their aid, as he was hunting nearby, but not fast enough to save poor Flarepaw, who's spine was crushed by the lumbering beast. The apprentices were again heartbroken, having lost their mother, littermate, and essentially their father as well. Brackenpaw, at the time, was injured during the battle with the badger, having been bitten on her shoulder, and so her warrior ceremony was put on hold for several more sunrises so she could recover. She eventually became known as Brackenflower, for her sharp tongue but kind heart. After her sister had her kits, the young warrior would visit her sister and her kits every chance she got, knowing her sister had no mate with her. She is very close to her siblings, but seems to have a stronger bond with Ambershine, along with her kits.

Skills~

fighting - 8

hunting - 6

swimming - 2

climbing - 5

stamina - 7

healing - 1

knowledge - 8

memory - 7

strength - 6

running - 5

Fri Jul 07, 2017 9:59 am

Could you say how her personality is similar to Ambershine? I'm not familiar with the character, and it would add length to the personality.

Fri Jul 07, 2017 1:09 pm

Fixed

Tue Jul 11, 2017 2:29 am

You need to add running, memory, and strength into the skills.

Tue Jul 11, 2017 3:00 am

Those are the skills i have always used for my warriors and they have been accepted with them..

Tue Jul 11, 2017 8:25 am

I updated the audition form recently

Tue Jul 11, 2017 9:59 am

Fixed.

Fri Jul 14, 2017 5:55 am

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