Scorpius

Thu Jul 06, 2017 4:08 pm

Scorpius ~ Unborn ~ Adam And Eve's group

Scorpius is a marbled brown tabby tom. He has kind blue eyes, like his mother. He has a light dusting of ginger-red coral highlights in his fur, also having a Coral nose and paw pads. He has white in his ears, but it only looks like a dusting of snow in his ears as it looks like tiny speckles.

As a kit, Scorpius is very playful and loves to pretend he is his father. He can be annoying, following his father around and coping his every move. Sometimes he pretends he is his father, trotting up to a cat and telling them to go hunting. He is very clumsy, always tripping over his own paws.

Quite like his father, as Scorpius grows, He will be very protective of his mother and siblings. He will protect them to his death. He is very loyal to his group, loving to feel the warm pelts of his group mates next to him as he hunts. He loves the cold. Scorpius would rather talk then fight, but will fight when Necessary. He will still be Clumsy, but its less noticeable, but he still trips over his own paws.

Skills (Out of ten)
Hunting: 7
Fighting:4
Strength: 5
Stamina: 9
Speed: 2
Memory: 10
Climbing: 1
Swimming: 3
Gripping on ice: 7

Mother|Eve|Alive|Spiritual Leader of A&E Group|@Mistpool
Father|Adam|Alive|Leader of A&E Group|@Brindledrop
Siblings|?????, @Brindledrop|????, @Snoo|1 open

Eve and Adam met just after Eve left Onyx's group. They became good friends and then became mates. Eve is now expecting her first litter.

Thu Jul 06, 2017 4:47 pm

What colour is coral??

His history needs to be his parents meeting.

Thu Jul 06, 2017 4:58 pm

Coral can be in several different colors

Thu Jul 06, 2017 4:59 pm

That's my point. I saw 'coral' and thought a bright blue hahahh

Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:43 pm

Ill change it to a soft dusting of ochre coral

Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:45 pm

...can you not just say "brown" or "tan"?

Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:51 pm

There fixed, adding history

Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:55 pm

...that's now made it more confusing? Also if he had that colour he would be a tortoiseshell which would make him infertile.

Thu Jul 06, 2017 7:06 pm

Fixed

Thu Jul 06, 2017 7:07 pm

Red ochre coral is like, too many words. Try "reddish ginger"

Thu Jul 06, 2017 7:08 pm

I did Red coral, Is that ok?

Thu Jul 06, 2017 7:09 pm

It...it won't be red though? Cats aren't properly red, they're ginger-red.

Thu Jul 06, 2017 7:11 pm

Fixed

Thu Jul 06, 2017 7:13 pm

His personality is also very...bland. He doesn't have much dimension to him. Maybe write about his kit personality and how he'll grow up and change?

Fri Jul 07, 2017 9:28 am

Finished!

Tue Jul 11, 2017 2:31 am

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