Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Mon Oct 02, 2017 2:39 pm

Name: Antkit (current) -> Antpaw (future) -> Antwhisker (future)
Age: 4 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Kit then Apprentice then Warrior
Clan: WaterClan

Antkit's appearance:

Appearance: Antkit is a black smoke Turkish Angora cat with pale green eyes that are the color of a green pear. He is very skinny and lean and what he makes up for strength he makes up in agility. His face and paws are the darkest shade of grey on his whole body. His tail is slightly more thicker-furred than the rest of his body, but it's unnoticeable to most. He is taller than both his sisters with longer legs than him.

Personality: Antkit is the little kit who looks to have been kicked around/bullied/bossed around way too many times in his youth. He's quite fearful, especially to those who are bigger than him and a tad bit curious. He doesn't get in trouble a lot, but if his curiosity goes too far, he might. He is quite clever though rarely shows it. He is like a nerd among a bunch of athletes. He doesn't fit in and is sensitive to what others think about him. He is a cry-baby when it comes to injuries and when others insult him. Luckily he has two brave sisters who will gladly stick up for him when the time comes.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 3
Hunting - 7
Climbing - 4
Running - 9
Swimming - 5
Strength - 2
Memory skills - 8
Stamina - 5

Family:
Mother - Lilac (deceased, loner, black smoke Turkish Angora with icy-blue eyes)
Father - Skyflame (deceased, warrior, white tom with brown eyes)
Littermates/siblings - Violetkit and Pearlkit

History: Skyflame met Lilac on a patrol that essentially got him lost around Two-legplace. At first she was scared of him, for she had heard about the wild cats that lived on the forest without the care of any two-legs. After a few minutes she realized he wasn't going to hurt him and offered him a chance to come with her. He didn't agree though, saying that his heart belonged to WaterClan. Eventually they both struck a bond and he even protected her from a dog one time, luckily the dog was so wimpy it ran off and did no harm to neither of them. She fell in love with them and that is what let to her having his three kits. When he visited the one day she had just given birth he was overcome with joy, but she told him "these kits do not deserve the life I live. Take them with you and let them be warriors." she said to him. So he did just that with the help of some Clan-mates and he had to prove he was still loyal to the Clan. 2 moons later he went to visit her and found out from a passing rogue that Lilac had been ran over by a car. His heart shattered and he was never the same tom again. 2 moons after that he died during the horrible flooding in the camp.

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Name: Violetkit (current) -> Violetpaw (future) -> Violetshine (future)
Age: 4 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Kit then Apprentice then Warrior
Clan: WaterClan

Violetkit's appearance:

Appearance: Violetkit is slightly thicker-furred than her brother Antkit. She's a Turkish Angora with black smoke and ginger tints to her fur, giving her name. She's smaller than him in height but she makes up for her height in her muscular body. She has shorter legs (the main reason she's the shortest of the litter). Her eyes are a very pale amber.

Personality: Violetkit is the strong-but-often-silent type of cat who is brave when the time calls for it but submissive any other time. She's carefree but is in a way that doesn't cause her to look bad or cause trouble. She's humorous and could lighten any-cat's mood but sometimes she is unsuccessful at doing so. She is seen mostly around her only brother Antkit because she serves as his protector. She will stand up for him when he calls for it and is very obedient. Though like her brother, she is sensitive and is somewhat of a cry-baby. She also brags a bit about her fighting skills. She can easily pin her brother even though he's almost twice her height.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 7
Hunting - 2
Climbing - 4
Running - 5
Swimming - 3
Strength - 8
Memory skills - 9
Stamina - 4

Family:
Mother - Lilac (deceased, loner, black smoke Turkish Angora with icy-blue eyes)
Father - Skyflame (deceased, warrior, white tom with brown eyes)
Littermates/siblings - Antkit and Pearlkit

History: Skyflame met Lilac on a patrol that essentially got him lost around Two-legplace. At first she was scared of him, for she had heard about the wild cats that lived on the forest without the care of any two-legs. After a few minutes she realized he wasn't going to hurt him and offered him a chance to come with her. He didn't agree though, saying that his heart belonged to WaterClan. Eventually they both struck a bond and he even protected her from a dog one time, luckily the dog was so wimpy it ran off and did no harm to neither of them. She fell in love with them and that is what let to her having his three kits. When he visited the one day she had just given birth he was overcome with joy, but she told him "these kits do not deserve the life I live. Take them with you and let them be warriors." she said to him. So he did just that with the help of some Clan-mates and he had to prove he was still loyal to the Clan. 2 moons later he went to visit her and found out from a passing rogue that Lilac had been ran over by a car. His heart shattered and he was never the same tom again. 2 moons after that he died during the horrible flooding in the camp.

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Name: Pearlkit (current) -> Pearlpaw (future) -> Pearlblossom (future)
Age: 4 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Kit then Apprentice then Warrior
Clan: WaterClan

Pearlkit's appearance:

Appearance: Pearlkit is a slightly thick-furred Turkish Angora with pearly white fur, hence how she got her name. She is lean and slender but has some muscle on her shoulders. Her eyes are two different colors. Her right eye is the icy-blue her mother had while her left eye is the color of mustard/dandelions/any yellow.

Personality: Pearlkit is very calm and quiet whenever no trouble is around her brother. She is playful, friendly, and obedient and will listen to reason instead of using brute force any day. Her favorite things to play are rabbit and pretending Violetkit is an enemy warrior. Sometimes her attitude will turn south and get as chilly as her pelt is white, especially if she sees her brother's in trouble. She will stick up for him whenever the time calls for and it very loyal to both her siblings. However she does like to brag that she's a better swimmer than they are.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 4
Hunting - 8
Climbing - 3
Running - 5
Swimming - 7
Strength - 3
Memory skills - 5
Stamina - 5

Family:
Mother - Lilac (deceased, loner, black smoke Turkish Angora with icy-blue eyes)
Father - Skyflame (deceased, warrior, white tom with brown eyes)
Littermates/siblings - Violetkit and Antkit

History: Skyflame met Lilac on a patrol that essentially got him lost around Two-legplace. At first she was scared of him, for she had heard about the wild cats that lived on the forest without the care of any two-legs. After a few minutes she realized he wasn't going to hurt him and offered him a chance to come with her. He didn't agree though, saying that his heart belonged to WaterClan. Eventually they both struck a bond and he even protected her from a dog one time, luckily the dog was so wimpy it ran off and did no harm to neither of them. She fell in love with them and that is what let to her having his three kits. When he visited the one day she had just given birth he was overcome with joy, but she told him "these kits do not deserve the life I live. Take them with you and let them be warriors." she said to him. So he did just that with the help of some Clan-mates and he had to prove he was still loyal to the Clan. 2 moons later he went to visit her and found out from a passing rogue that Lilac had been ran over by a car. His heart shattered and he was never the same tom again. 2 moons after that he died during the horrible flooding in the camp.

Wed Oct 04, 2017 8:41 pm

Slight snag in your plan, there's not really a populated Twolegplace close to WaterClan. The New Twolegplace is mostly construction grounds at the moment, and there are no cats that live near to the edge of the Clan territories.

Wed Oct 04, 2017 8:43 pm

Okay so maybe I can edit Lilac to be a Clan-cat, would that work out?

Wed Oct 04, 2017 8:47 pm

Well no, because then your cats wouldn't have those markings.

Wed Oct 04, 2017 8:49 pm

Ugh, maybe he got so lost he barely made his way back? Where exactly is the closest Two-legplace and maybe she was just living at the construction sight?

Wed Oct 04, 2017 9:05 pm

No need to be rude, I'm trying to help you out here so your cats make sense within the world.
The closest Twolegplace is over the river and behind BrightClan, so theres no way a WaterClan cat would get lost to there.
A cat living in a construction site would get killed.

You're also missing 'stamina' from their skills.

Wed Oct 04, 2017 9:09 pm

What would you suggest their mother be? Also sorry that wasn't intended rudeness, I'm getting a little frustrated Sad

Wed Oct 18, 2017 11:00 pm

You can change the mother to a loner, or a rogue. Change up her history, so that Lilac might have been passing by that border, and that's where their father met her.

Sat Oct 21, 2017 7:56 pm

#bump @Rubymist

Mon Oct 30, 2017 4:10 pm

#finalbump @Rubymist it will be removed if it is not completed properly.

Fri Dec 15, 2017 5:12 pm

HELLO!!! These are finished!

Mon Dec 18, 2017 8:47 am

Please add stamina to all of their skills. I'd recommend just making Lilac a loner or rogue since the closest Twolegplace is too far of a distance for a Clan cat to walk when they're just 'exploring'.

Tue Dec 19, 2017 12:07 pm

@Daisyleap finished editing

Tue Dec 19, 2017 12:11 pm

The history still implies that Lilac was a kittypet.

Tue Dec 19, 2017 12:19 pm

Edited, does it still now?

Tue Dec 19, 2017 12:20 pm

Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

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Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)

Re: Antkit, Violetkit, and Pearlkit of WaterClan (FINISHED!)