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Vixenfang of Duskclan
Thu Oct 05, 2017 9:00 am
Name: Vixenfang
Age: 14 moons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Duskclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Vixenfang is a rude cat. She is cruel and loves seeing cats hurt. Secretly, she likes the conflict between the rogues and the clans, but would defend her clan with her life. She would do anything to keep her sister safe. Vixenfang is a possessive cat, and what's hers STAYS hers. Vixenfang would always rather solve problems with violence rather than words, especially when it comes to territory disputes. In general, she is a nasty cat, but not when it comes to family. Vixenfang is snappy most cats, but not her sister. When someone is mean to her sister, she responds with violence and fury. No one hurt her sister, and she loves Opalgaze with all her heart. She is very inconsiderate of her clanmates. She will take the biggest, tastiest prey on the prey pile and never helped the others. The one group of cats she likes are the elders. Vixenfang loves visiting the elder's den, and listens to their stories. when they are hungry, she gets them food. When they have ticks, she removes them. The way elders act to her instead of other cats makes her feel warm and like she belongs.
Appearance:
Vixenfang is a beautiful long-furred red she-cat. The fur around her muzzle is white. Her eyes are a fierce amber color, and her hind paws are jet-black. Vixenfang has sharp teeth, but her claws are shorter than usual.
Skills:
Fighting - 9
Swimming - 0
Hunting - 6
Strength - 8
Climbing - 3
Speed - 3
Stamina - 4
Memory - 5
Family:
Mother - Silvereyes(dead)
Father - Iceflame(sick and dying with a cancerous tumor)(open)
Sister - Opalflash(open)
History: As a kit, Vixenfang was neglected. She had no friends, her mother was found dead outside of camp, and she slept alone from the moment she was weaned. Her sister Opalflash was sick very often until she was an apprentice. Vixenfang had to become an apprentice without her sister, which was very hard. On her first day out of camp, Vixenfang was threatened by her mentor and almost thrown off the Rocky Cliffs, but managed to escape, her mentor never seen again. A new mentor was chosen and she grew quickly. Vixenfang never saw how much her mentor cared for her, until he died falling off the Rocky Cliffs. Once again, she needed a new mentor. when she finally became a warrior, she was so proud! But then, she fell off the Rocky Cliffs herself. It seemed that she was cursed, but she barely managed to pull herself up. She stayed close to camp for a few moons, and now will never set foot near the cliffs again. Vixenfang was lead away from camp by a shadowy cat who promised she would be ok and that she was cared for where they went. But, once she was out of Duskclan territory, she was attacked. Her trust in others disappeared, but not for Opalflash. They stayed together, closer than ever before. Now, Vixenfang is the way she is. Not trusting others, but with a strange love for violence.
Age: 14 moons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Duskclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Vixenfang is a rude cat. She is cruel and loves seeing cats hurt. Secretly, she likes the conflict between the rogues and the clans, but would defend her clan with her life. She would do anything to keep her sister safe. Vixenfang is a possessive cat, and what's hers STAYS hers. Vixenfang would always rather solve problems with violence rather than words, especially when it comes to territory disputes. In general, she is a nasty cat, but not when it comes to family. Vixenfang is snappy most cats, but not her sister. When someone is mean to her sister, she responds with violence and fury. No one hurt her sister, and she loves Opalgaze with all her heart. She is very inconsiderate of her clanmates. She will take the biggest, tastiest prey on the prey pile and never helped the others. The one group of cats she likes are the elders. Vixenfang loves visiting the elder's den, and listens to their stories. when they are hungry, she gets them food. When they have ticks, she removes them. The way elders act to her instead of other cats makes her feel warm and like she belongs.
Appearance:
Vixenfang is a beautiful long-furred red she-cat. The fur around her muzzle is white. Her eyes are a fierce amber color, and her hind paws are jet-black. Vixenfang has sharp teeth, but her claws are shorter than usual.
Skills:
Fighting - 9
Swimming - 0
Hunting - 6
Strength - 8
Climbing - 3
Speed - 3
Stamina - 4
Memory - 5
Family:
Mother - Silvereyes(dead)
Father - Iceflame(sick and dying with a cancerous tumor)(open)
Sister - Opalflash(open)
History: As a kit, Vixenfang was neglected. She had no friends, her mother was found dead outside of camp, and she slept alone from the moment she was weaned. Her sister Opalflash was sick very often until she was an apprentice. Vixenfang had to become an apprentice without her sister, which was very hard. On her first day out of camp, Vixenfang was threatened by her mentor and almost thrown off the Rocky Cliffs, but managed to escape, her mentor never seen again. A new mentor was chosen and she grew quickly. Vixenfang never saw how much her mentor cared for her, until he died falling off the Rocky Cliffs. Once again, she needed a new mentor. when she finally became a warrior, she was so proud! But then, she fell off the Rocky Cliffs herself. It seemed that she was cursed, but she barely managed to pull herself up. She stayed close to camp for a few moons, and now will never set foot near the cliffs again. Vixenfang was lead away from camp by a shadowy cat who promised she would be ok and that she was cared for where they went. But, once she was out of Duskclan territory, she was attacked. Her trust in others disappeared, but not for Opalflash. They stayed together, closer than ever before. Now, Vixenfang is the way she is. Not trusting others, but with a strange love for violence.
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Re: Vixenfang of Duskclan
Fri Oct 06, 2017 1:48 pm
She could use a bit more personality. Really delve into her nastiness, but give her some positive traits, too.
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Re: Vixenfang of Duskclan
Fri Oct 06, 2017 10:34 pm
Done! Thanks, Daisy! 
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