Sagenose of DuskClan

Name: Sagenose

Age: 14 moons

Gender: Female

Rank: Warrior

Clan: DuskClan

Appearance: She is has a fluffy, heavy coat of fur, with a white underbelly, legs, and paws. Her pelt is a deep red, run with lighter ginger stripes in a tabby pattern.She has hazel green eyes and a natural smile when her jaw is closed. Tiny fur tufts adorn each of her ears, and a scar comes down and a little past one (the ear's not torn, fur just doesn't grow on the spot). Her fur is long and sleek. 

(sorta like this)

Personality: Sagenose, as a young warrior, still has youthful energy about her. She's kind and empathetic, with careful consideration of other cats' feelings. She tends to be talkative and well-worded. She's a generally happy cat, and not easily put out. However, her excessively optimistic side can get overwhelming and her excitable nature is not always shared by the older cats around her. She seeks groups, finding comfort in company, and doesn't handle solitude well. She hates facing her past and any mention of it sends her into an odd quiet streak that is not typical of her character.  

Skills: 

Fighting- 6
Hunting- 7
Climbing- 8
Running- 6
Swimming- 4
Strength- 5
Stamina- 6
Memory Skills- 7

Family:

Mother- Cloudwish (deceased)
Father- Burnshadow (living, warrior, adoptable)
Siblings- Poppykit (deceased), Dawnclimb (living, warrior, adoptable), Berrykit (deceased)

History:
Sagenose was born in a litter of four, two of which did not survive. It was devastating for Cloudwish, and she never quite recovered. Only Sagekit and Dawnkit survived. Their kit life was a kind all its own. Cloudwish was a distant mother and Burnshadow was a busy father, and so the two littermates settled for time to themselves. They squabbled, playfought, and made trouble together, and all the while started a bond that would not leave them during the coming moons of unrest.  When they were new apprentices together, their mother caught greencough. It was a surprising and unexpected bought, and she succumbed quickly, even as they begged her to stay with them. The rowdy apprentices, specifically Sagepaw (who had been more mischievous rather than energetic) were suddenly quiet. 
Over her six moons of training, she learned quickly, pouring herself into her apprenticeship to avoid letting the trauma of her mother's death swallow her whole. She quickly displayed an aptitude for hunting and climbing, her lithe build allowing for agile and quick movements, the grace needed to be a successful hunter. Close to the end of her apprenticeship, her father began to trickle back into her life. It started with small talk, acknowledgment where there was none, and then hunting trips together. Slowly but surely, he became a support system for Dawnpaw and her. His relationship is still on the mend, but looking to be a healthy one. 
Her warrior ceremony was the highlight of her life, the first absolutely positive thing to happen in her lifetime. She was named for her talent for hunting, her incredible senses. As DuskClan cheered her name, she grinned, warm. 
Her warriorhood has been short so far, but she's proven herself to be a valuable friend, clanmate, and capable asset to DuskClan. Her mother's death still hurts her, but she pushes through, trying to heal alongside her sibling and her father. 



Here's to my first audition! Do I have to make separate pages for the family for people to adopt or can I leave it up to them, provided it's based on Sagenose's history? Do I have to post that Sagenose needs someone to rp her sister and father in the Adoptions section? 
I'm so sorry if this is listed in the rules somewhere!

I'll answer your question here. You don't have to make the family, people will approach you if they want to adopt them. Or if you want to you can create the auditions and people will adopt them too, seeing as you want to have her sister and father actually alive.

I'll also let you know, unless she was a kittypet before, she's not a Maine Coon. Wild cats aren't purebred unless they have kittypet heritage, but you can instead just put that she's 'large for her age' or something along those lines.

Fixed!

looks good!