- AnchorPaw
- Posts : 1
Age : 22
AnchorKit Kit of WaterClan
( i am hoping this is good, lol im disabled and i aint very good at most things, i lied make that all things. if needed to change, add, or do anything just tell me and i will)
- FeatherRidiculously Awesome Supporter
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Location : America
Re: AnchorKit Kit of WaterClan
-Anchor is not an accepted prefix, please go here and pick from the accepted prefixes! Alongside that note, when you audition a kit or apprentice, please put what their future names will be. For example, Briarkit, Briarpaw, Briarflight.
-Please don't swear in the auditions. As stated in the rules, swearing is only allowed in the chatbox, but it's an easy mistake to make.
-Her personality could use more, on that note. Go into more depth about how she's caring, but make sure to give her flaws too. If she's adventurous, she could be overly bold and defiant because of it, for example.
-The skills are listed like bullet points and rated 1-10, 10 being the best at everything, 1 being they only barely know how to do it. 1-3 are bad, 4-6 is average, and 7-10 is best. Cats are only allowed to have two skills 7 or higher. If you check the audition guidelines, you'll find the skill list.
-Please flesh out the history and add a separate category for the family, with the names involved. And finally, please space things out so everything isn't all clumped together.
I know all those edits might seem like a lot, but I'm sure you can do it!
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