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FINISHED || Hawkthroat | Warrior | FireClan
Sun Dec 10, 2017 6:17 am
Name: Hawkkit || Hawkpaw || Hawkthroat
Age: 29 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: FireClan
Mentor: Lionfur || Alive || [OPEN]
Apprentice: [Open - Would like ASAP please!]
Appearance:
Hawkthroat is a small yet lithe and agile black tom with short fur. He has ginger accents along his neck, lower jaw and at the end of of his tail. His eyes are the same color as his ginger fur accents, and are almost always narrowed in suspicion. Despite being of a smaller stature, Hawkthroat has a defined muscular tone, especially along his legs. His legs and paws have cuts scattered on them, while the rest of his pelt is clean and well-groomed. There are two nicks on each of his ears.
Personality: Hawkthroat is a fierce and cold tom who loves to practice fighting techniques. Despite his blunt and cold personality, he is loyal to the clan and to the warrior code, and would die to protect both. He is easily suspicious of others, and is a good fighter due to his strategic mind. However, he would much rather fight than find a way to bring a bloodless treaty between cats. For this reason, he is often overlooked in joining the Gatherings, as he is very vocal despite being a young warrior.
-Good Traits: loyal, good fighting skills
-Bad Traits: cold, calculating, easily agitated
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 7
Hunting - 5
Climbing - 7
Running - 4
Swimming - 2
Strength - 6
Stamina - 4
Memory skills - 3
Family:
Mother - Poppybreeze | Deceased
Father - Ashfoot | Deceased
Sibling(s) - Webfoot | Alive || Kestrelwing | Alive | (Other Litter)
Mate - [Planned] || [OPEN]
Kits - [Planned] || N/A
History: Hawkthroat was born during a harsh leafbare with his sister Webfoot. Both were born small and fragile, and many in the clan were afraid they would not make it through the season. Both Hawkthroat and Webfoot proved them wrong, though. Though his sister's size affected her ability to train as an apprentice, Hawkthroat found it easy to train. He excelled at fighting and learned new techniques effortlessly, though his hunting skills were less than par. He soon became a warrior for his fighting skill and strength. Though he believes he has earned his name and place in the clan, Hawkthroat is still unsatisfied with the current events and his place in the clan. Despite this empty feeling, Hawkthroat continues to work tirelessly to aid his clan, especially now with the invasion of the rogue groups.
Age: 29 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: FireClan
Mentor: Lionfur || Alive || [OPEN]
Apprentice: [Open - Would like ASAP please!]
Appearance:
Hawkthroat is a small yet lithe and agile black tom with short fur. He has ginger accents along his neck, lower jaw and at the end of of his tail. His eyes are the same color as his ginger fur accents, and are almost always narrowed in suspicion. Despite being of a smaller stature, Hawkthroat has a defined muscular tone, especially along his legs. His legs and paws have cuts scattered on them, while the rest of his pelt is clean and well-groomed. There are two nicks on each of his ears.
Personality: Hawkthroat is a fierce and cold tom who loves to practice fighting techniques. Despite his blunt and cold personality, he is loyal to the clan and to the warrior code, and would die to protect both. He is easily suspicious of others, and is a good fighter due to his strategic mind. However, he would much rather fight than find a way to bring a bloodless treaty between cats. For this reason, he is often overlooked in joining the Gatherings, as he is very vocal despite being a young warrior.
-Good Traits: loyal, good fighting skills
-Bad Traits: cold, calculating, easily agitated
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 7
Hunting - 5
Climbing - 7
Running - 4
Swimming - 2
Strength - 6
Stamina - 4
Memory skills - 3
Family:
Mother - Poppybreeze | Deceased
Father - Ashfoot | Deceased
Sibling(s) - Webfoot | Alive || Kestrelwing | Alive | (Other Litter)
Mate - [Planned] || [OPEN]
Kits - [Planned] || N/A
History: Hawkthroat was born during a harsh leafbare with his sister Webfoot. Both were born small and fragile, and many in the clan were afraid they would not make it through the season. Both Hawkthroat and Webfoot proved them wrong, though. Though his sister's size affected her ability to train as an apprentice, Hawkthroat found it easy to train. He excelled at fighting and learned new techniques effortlessly, though his hunting skills were less than par. He soon became a warrior for his fighting skill and strength. Though he believes he has earned his name and place in the clan, Hawkthroat is still unsatisfied with the current events and his place in the clan. Despite this empty feeling, Hawkthroat continues to work tirelessly to aid his clan, especially now with the invasion of the rogue groups.
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Re: FINISHED || Hawkthroat | Warrior | FireClan
Tue Dec 19, 2017 11:58 am
Once again, you are missing stamina. The skills still need to be lowered, and the personality could be elaborated more.
- Konesans
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Re: FINISHED || Hawkthroat | Warrior | FireClan
Wed Dec 20, 2017 11:18 am
Fixed.
- Konesans
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Re: FINISHED || Hawkthroat | Warrior | FireClan
Mon Dec 25, 2017 10:39 am
Bumping :3
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Re: FINISHED || Hawkthroat | Warrior | FireClan
Mon Dec 25, 2017 11:04 am
Please do not double post. If you'd like your audition to be checked, private message an administrator instead of bumping.
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