Sandfern of Frostclan

Sandfern
12 moon she-cat
Frostclan warrior
Tan cat with white paws and stripes. Sandfern has a battle scat on her left ear and she has a black paw.
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Personality: Sandfern is a gentle cat who is very loving. Sandfern is very cranky when she is hungry. Snowfern loves kits and sometimes dreams of getting a mate and having her own kits. Snowfern is a dedicated warrior to Frostclan but she actually hates hunting. Sandfern can be very lazy sometimes. Sandfern is friendly and she is easy to make friends with.

Skillz:
Hunting2
Fighting7
Swimming0
Strength5
Memory6
Stamina4
Agility9
climbing1
History:
Mother:Briarsong ( deceased)
Father: Rabbitbreeze ( deceased )
No siblings

Sandfern was always a sweet kit and tried to do everything right. But one day when she was an apprentice, A patrol found her mother's body besides a tree. Devastated by this, Sandfern wanted to prove that she could be as good of a warrior as her mother and father combined. Later as a warrior, Rabbitbreeze died of bloodcough during leaf-bare but this time, Snowfern knew he was going to die because he was old and week then.

anyone?

Aqua we have a thing about not double posting unless 24 hours has gone by with nobody replying, then you can post with the bump tag. 

Is this cat's name Snowfern or Sandfern? And her personality needs more depth, half of it seems to just be explaining her skills.

Oops sorry it was late at night lemme change that for you

Btw I was waiting for my dad to get home from Arizona

Her skills still need fixing.

am i missing a skill?

Wait sorry, personality hahah

its ok
i changed it

Could use more history other than just her parents dying.

And her appearance needs more too.

Finished

Please add more to the appearance in the future.