redstripe of frostclan

name= redstripe
clan= frostclan
gender/ age= tom, 26 moons
rank= loyal warrior
parents= no one knows, he was found as a 6 moon old in the forest, and never got any foster parents. real dad= scratch mom= dawn



siblings= non

appearance= he has reddish colored fur, with black stripes going down his back, starting at his neck, and meeting  together at the tip of his tail. he is lean, and strongly built, you can see his large mussles move as he walks. he has short hair  

pastlife= his parents where not good parents, they abused him in many ways, they only gave him a quarter of a mouse a day, beat him, tried to drown him, and once tried to give him to twolegs, and one time trew him into a badger den. soon after they threw him into the badger den, the badger came, they let the bader ALMOST kill him, then grabbed him at the last second and threw him into a tree, picked him up and ran to the den. after that they healed his wounds, and then after he was well again, they threw him out on a snowy day when he was 6 moons old, laughed and told him out useless he was, then walked away ( he does not know this but soon after his parents went crazy and killed themselves) he refuses to tell anyone about his past, thinking they might think less of him.

as a apprintace, he was picked on often, other apprentices judging him for not having parents in the clan, and for being a " rogue"

as a warrior he was always know was one of the best fighter, he proved this in the huge battle that happened 10 moons ago, he got scratched up pretty bad on his right side, and it left a he scare, he tries to hide the scare at most times, and hates it when people see it because they make a big deal about it.  

behavior= headstrong, hard to make friends with, but is still very popular in the clans, and other clans, he does have some enemys, and a few friends, he is well guarded with his feelings, though if you somehow find a way into his heart, he will protect you with his life if he has to

skills

fighting= 9/10
swimming= 3/10
hunting= 8/10
climbing= 2/0
tracking= 5/10
running= 10/10
sneak attacks= 4/10

He needs more weaknesses in the skills section and more history. Plus, he needs biological parents and what happened to them.

ok, done

You might want to add a little more to history, like what happened in his warrior life

(hint: there was a gigantic war about 10 moons previous to our current time)

cool, nice and done

The spelling could use some work but