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LilyRidiculously Awesome Supporter
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Flamepaw of FrostClan
Sun Jun 12, 2016 4:49 pm
Flamepaw (Warrior Name: Flametail) 6 moons Apprentice Frostclan
Large ginger tom with orange eyes. White belly and white paws.
Kind, Loving, never fights, Never starts a fight, wants to be a warrior, loves to hunt.
Skills:
Great hunter/fighter, hates to swim or climb trees, great jumper and not very fast.
Family/History:
No Brothers or sisters. Mother and father were killed by Brightclan so he hates them.
Met Littlepaw at four trees(Or the meeting place). They have been meeting ever since.
Large ginger tom with orange eyes. White belly and white paws.
Kind, Loving, never fights, Never starts a fight, wants to be a warrior, loves to hunt.
Skills:
Great hunter/fighter, hates to swim or climb trees, great jumper and not very fast.
Family/History:
No Brothers or sisters. Mother and father were killed by Brightclan so he hates them.
Met Littlepaw at four trees(Or the meeting place). They have been meeting ever since.
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Re: Flamepaw of FrostClan
Sun Jun 12, 2016 10:19 pm
Needs more history, skills, detailed personality and more appearance.
- LilyRidiculously Awesome Supporter
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Re: Flamepaw of FrostClan
Mon Jun 13, 2016 9:30 am
Flamepaw 6 moons Apprentice Frostclan
Ginger tom with orange eyes and white belly and paws.
Kind, Loving, never fights, Never starts a fight, wants to be a warrior, loves to hunt, Caring, Hunter, Adventurous, Accessible, Active, Adaptive, Admirable, Challenging, Athletic, Dedicated, Earnest, Fair, Faithful, Forgiving, Hard Working, Honest, Neat.
Father loved him and taught him many traits like Hard woker, Honest, neat, Dedicated and Active. Mother taught him how to be Adaptive, Admirable, Fair, Faithful and Earnest. He learned that he loved to adventure when he became a apprentice and also is a natual hunter. He has always been challenging to all cats.
Jump:10/10, Attack:7/10, Swimming:0/10, Climbing:1/10, Speed:5/10, Taste:9/10, Smell:9/10, Hear: 10/10, Touch:1/10, Sight:10/10, Stamina:1/10, Memory:9/10
Family: No siblings. Met Littlepaw at a gathering.
Past Life:
Was born to Frostheart and Firejaw of Frostclan. He was originally given the name Redkit, but he asked the leader to change it after parents death. Parents were killed by Boulderpaw and Lynxpaw when he was made a apprentice. He will always hate Brightclan.
Ginger tom with orange eyes and white belly and paws.
Kind, Loving, never fights, Never starts a fight, wants to be a warrior, loves to hunt, Caring, Hunter, Adventurous, Accessible, Active, Adaptive, Admirable, Challenging, Athletic, Dedicated, Earnest, Fair, Faithful, Forgiving, Hard Working, Honest, Neat.
Father loved him and taught him many traits like Hard woker, Honest, neat, Dedicated and Active. Mother taught him how to be Adaptive, Admirable, Fair, Faithful and Earnest. He learned that he loved to adventure when he became a apprentice and also is a natual hunter. He has always been challenging to all cats.
Jump:10/10, Attack:7/10, Swimming:0/10, Climbing:1/10, Speed:5/10, Taste:9/10, Smell:9/10, Hear: 10/10, Touch:1/10, Sight:10/10, Stamina:1/10, Memory:9/10
Family: No siblings. Met Littlepaw at a gathering.
Past Life:
Was born to Frostheart and Firejaw of Frostclan. He was originally given the name Redkit, but he asked the leader to change it after parents death. Parents were killed by Boulderpaw and Lynxpaw when he was made a apprentice. He will always hate Brightclan.
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Re: Flamepaw of FrostClan
Mon Jun 13, 2016 10:25 am
Personality shouldn't be in a list, it should be in a detailed paragraph.
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Re: Flamepaw of FrostClan
Mon Jun 13, 2016 10:54 am
Listing the traits is actually fine, but I need to see an explanation of why she is that why, examples of how she shows those traits, etc.
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Re: Flamepaw of FrostClan
Mon Jun 13, 2016 7:13 pm
Flamepaw's a boy. Added stuff.
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Re: Flamepaw of FrostClan
Tue Jun 14, 2016 2:05 am
Sorry, I keep getting it mixed up hehe
I will move the correct audition into the original soon.
I will move the correct audition into the original soon.
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