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Darkraven - Frostclan
Thu May 18, 2017 5:31 pm
Name: Darkraven (Prefers Dark)
Clan: FrostClan
Age/gender: 35 moons/ She-cat
Rank: Warrior
Description: Darkraven is a night black cat. She is long and slender with a white chest and chin, that fades into light grey on her muzzle. She has white on the insides of her legs, and on the backside of the tail, witch also fades to light grey. She has a light grey-white mix on her back and black ear tips to go with her dark grey markings on her forehead and tail. She has beautiful amber eyes that have green specks in them, along with a dark reddish looking nose. She has long slender legs to go with her short fur but fluffy tail.
Skills; out of ten
Fighting: 7/10
Hunting: 5/10
Herb knowledge: 1/10
Running: 9/10
Climbing:2/10
Swimming: 3/10
Memory: 6/10
Stamina: 5/10
Personality: Darkraven is a head strong cat that always speaks her mind. She is known to be stubborn, and hates to look weak. Even from a young age she was always the leader with the kits she played with, and when she and her brother snuck away from their parents den. Darkraven has great leadership skills, and takes all the cats opinions, beliefs, ideas, and health into account before making a large decision. Darkraven is a very brave cat, and never backs down from a challenge. She hates when cats pity her or look down upon her. Darkraven is tough, but does have a soft side when it comes to young, injured, or i cats.
History: Darkraven was born a rogue with one brother. Her mother didn't like her much, but her father adored her. She was always getting in trouble, usually while trying to follow her dad to go hunting. When Darkraven was 7 moons old her father finally agreed to take her hunting with him. It turned bad quickly. They ran into a fox while hunting, and it killed her father. Darkraven was devastated, and even more so when three days later her mother up and left them, but she refused to let all this put her down. She went to the clans she had heard her dad talk about, and convinced them to take her in.
Family:
Crush; None
Mate None
Kits; None
Mother: Milo (Open)
Father: Midnight (Dead)
Brother: Mud (Dead)
Clan: FrostClan
Age/gender: 35 moons/ She-cat
Rank: Warrior
Description: Darkraven is a night black cat. She is long and slender with a white chest and chin, that fades into light grey on her muzzle. She has white on the insides of her legs, and on the backside of the tail, witch also fades to light grey. She has a light grey-white mix on her back and black ear tips to go with her dark grey markings on her forehead and tail. She has beautiful amber eyes that have green specks in them, along with a dark reddish looking nose. She has long slender legs to go with her short fur but fluffy tail.
Skills; out of ten
Fighting: 7/10
Hunting: 5/10
Herb knowledge: 1/10
Running: 9/10
Climbing:2/10
Swimming: 3/10
Memory: 6/10
Stamina: 5/10
Personality: Darkraven is a head strong cat that always speaks her mind. She is known to be stubborn, and hates to look weak. Even from a young age she was always the leader with the kits she played with, and when she and her brother snuck away from their parents den. Darkraven has great leadership skills, and takes all the cats opinions, beliefs, ideas, and health into account before making a large decision. Darkraven is a very brave cat, and never backs down from a challenge. She hates when cats pity her or look down upon her. Darkraven is tough, but does have a soft side when it comes to young, injured, or i cats.
History: Darkraven was born a rogue with one brother. Her mother didn't like her much, but her father adored her. She was always getting in trouble, usually while trying to follow her dad to go hunting. When Darkraven was 7 moons old her father finally agreed to take her hunting with him. It turned bad quickly. They ran into a fox while hunting, and it killed her father. Darkraven was devastated, and even more so when three days later her mother up and left them, but she refused to let all this put her down. She went to the clans she had heard her dad talk about, and convinced them to take her in.
Family:
Crush; None
Mate None
Kits; None
Mother: Milo (Open)
Father: Midnight (Dead)
Brother: Mud (Dead)
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Re: Darkraven - Frostclan
Fri May 19, 2017 10:49 am
Welcome to the site! I'm Davewing, also known as Dovewing. This is a pretty good first audition. Do you think you could make your text a little bigger?
The audition looks good, but I don't really see any weaknesses or faults in the personality. I see that she dosen't like to be pitied or looked down upon, but is there anything else than that? I also don't see her brother, Mud, mentioned in the history?
Other than that, it's looking good. The edit button is in the top right when you're ready. If you have any questions, be sure to ask. Anyone with a purple, blue, or light green name will be able to help.
The audition looks good, but I don't really see any weaknesses or faults in the personality. I see that she dosen't like to be pitied or looked down upon, but is there anything else than that? I also don't see her brother, Mud, mentioned in the history?
Other than that, it's looking good. The edit button is in the top right when you're ready. If you have any questions, be sure to ask. Anyone with a purple, blue, or light green name will be able to help.
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