Starlingpaw of Frostclan

Starlingpaw-Starlingnose
8 moon she-cat
Frostclan apprentince
Starlingpaw is a very dark brown cat with a streak of light brown on her chest, furry tail, and white paws. Starlingpaw has white ear tips, and a pink nose.

Personality: Starlingpaw is a cat who sometimes just seems to hate everyone. Starlingpaw is more independent and thinks she is to old for " games". Starlingpaw is determined to be the best warrior ever and to prove that she can be the best. Starlingpaw is usually focused in training so she can learn better

Skills:
Hunting3
Fighting7
Stamina6
Agility4
Swimming1
Climbing2
Strength4


History: Starlingpaw was born to two rouges that loved her dearly and wanted to train her to be the best. Starlingpaw always thought she would live her whole life as a rouge until one day when she was six moons old, Starlingpaw's mother had heard dogs around where they lived and she told Staringpaw to go somewhere safe. Moments later, a dog jumped out and attacked. Her mother told her to go and find a safe home and Starinpaw's parents would fight off the dog. Staringpaw kept running and running until she reached Frostclan territory. Frostclan welcomed her in as an apprentince

Okay, it's gotten to the point where I'm not going to accept rogues with histories like this. They're too frequent and too illogical.

If the kit's parents hated them, they would not have survived. Kits depend entirely on their mother for food until they're at least a month old, and can't really catch food or defend themselves until they're at least three months old. It makes zero logical sense that the mother would treat the kit like this, queen's instincts are literally to keep their kits alive until they can survive on their own, which is usually at 3 months, then chase them off. Or maybe keep them around for longer. If the queen didn't like her kits, she could simply leave them to die on day one. If a father doesn't like the kits, he leaves the mother, or kills them himself before they've opened their eyes.

okay I finished

You'll need to change the personality to match the new history

Okay. Finished